This is a video clip of our presentation its small because of the camera dying
 here is our feed back

Here is my presantation.

To day we made changes to the idea of filming we have decided to change a bit of the plot so its more  crime than horror . we have based the story around human traffiking  its based on the organ stealing that gose on around the world and how it happens . we are keeping to the same scenes on the story borad just changeing a few  scenes. I have keept the death scen in the strat of the film but have changed it so that it is only a flash back now  and  have gotten rid of the part when you see the killer so Im not going  to show his identity  at all .This also makes the filming  easyer. I am able to get more effect out of each shot now without giveing anything away.




here are the story boards I have created. In the story boards I have pland out how i would like to shoot each scene and also how to capture what kind of message i want to send out to mu audeance witch is about how trafficking happens.

here is my filming secgual I have based it around my actors time table and also mine so that i can get all the shots i need and know how long i can use them for  this helped me keep track of what needed to be filmed and also  when to book the camera and tripod.

today we took pictures of the actors , locations, props and costumes :

locations :

I have chosen this location for the body scene and  it looks like a deserted area for somebody to hide a body . as well as it being rather enclosed withe the wall and the leave on the floor sticks with the theme that the murderer kills in the forest  there fore  it could all be happening at once.

This location I have chosen for the privet eyes  office  as it is bright and has all the props we could use in instead it already such as  boards to attach evidence to  as well as a  computer and projector we could use and  there fore it can all fit in to place.

 actors and costumes:

for the costume and actors i have taken pictographs of them in there costumes here is what i want the  trafficker / murderer to look like  i have chosen  for them to be wearing all black so that they can blend in and also black is associated with villeins as you expect them to be in dark colors and  be in the dark . I have also   asked for them to wear a hood so that the identity remains a mystery. The actor laying the murderer is Sian Colbert .I have chosen Sian to lay the villein as she has experiences in playing villeins before in such things as theater.

here is a photo of the actor playing the victim  Sacha West . her costume is  a white t shirt even though she is not wearing one in the picture and jeans as well as a casual coat. Im going to leave her hair down to show femininity..I have chosen sacah for the victim again because of the experiences she has in acting she  knows how to portray innocence and look scared.

 Here is the actor playing the dead body sain colbert  . I have used casushal clothing  such as jeans and a t shirt . no specific color I have chosen sian for the part of the body due to him being a reliable actor and  will show up on time  when needed for filming as well as experiences in playing various parts  in  film.

Here are the props i would like to use  but Im finding my own props to is  such as  black gloves  that belong to the murderer and are also form the actor playing murderer and have also used fake blood  .  I would like to use the hat and rope but somebody els is using  those props for there filming so i am unable to even though i would like to use them . but the police hat can symbolic for  the privet eye and how formal she should dress.

today in media we created a mood boad for our short film .
we also created a questionare for the people in our class to help us determan what we should use in our films such as chould it be scarey should ther be a romance .ect. I created 15 questions and asked 10 people in teh class to get an idea of what t mold my film around.
My questions were:
1.whats you fave film?
2.why ?
3.whats you least fave?
4.why?
5.whats yur gender ?
6.how old are you?
7.what type of music do u like in films?
8.what age f actors do you like in the films you watch?
9.dose the promo and the way its presented effect wather or not you go and watch it?
10.what was the last film you went to see?
11.why ?
12.what criime films have u seen/if any?
13. what did you like abut them ?
14. what do you expect in a crime film ?
15. what is you fave genre?

I then anylised the answers i was given and came to the conclushion that many people are scared easly and like action and romance in there crime films as well as murder but also love the mysitry of trying to figure out whos the killer?.
also that the age dosnt matter and that if the promo is not gd they wnt go and see it so watching the promo dose  help give them an opinon of the film before they have seen it.

the questions

the answers

closes up of the answers  underneath

today in media we created the scripts and will then tomorrow take pictures of the costumes and props and also the locations we will be using we have organized the sound effects and lights we will need ready for  the filming and have also asked misprision for the rooms we will be using . also we  wrote down the directions for for all the actors in the project so that they can work on how they want to act it out . we have also decided on the camera angles.


the plot starts with  the detective telling his comrades what he knows and also what needs to be done to stop it also in that there is a scene of a dead body  then it goes back to him and as soon  as he is finished talking there is another scene of what is happening at the same time he was giving his speech . it starts of  with a innocent girl being killed and the murderer remains a mystery.